Analysis of To the Core



To the Core

Was it a game of life
or just one passing trend
in tormenting my soul
to a bitterness with end

From the sweetness of her lips
to a sourness in her voice
came words so unkind
it left me with no choice

Festered words without passion
laired deep within her core
left me no alternative
but to leave the one I once adored

Never to return
never to again to see
never to have her know
what she really meant to me


Scheme A XBXB XCXC XAXX XDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 101 110111 111101 01011 1010011 1010101 101001 11101 111111 1010110 110101 1110100 111011101 10101 1010111 101101 1110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 401
Words 85
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on July 05, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Norman Wilson

IntroductionForgotten are the times the tick of a clock once chimed sobering sounds that caressed my hearts nightly dreams. As I awaken to the touch of light that burns upon a candles wick flickering my words for all to see. This drives my thoughts through the darkest of nights of loneliness that renders my quill upon parchment with ink that dances to minds and souls.Now I hear the screeching of my heart when the blue horizon covers the orb of emptiness.Within the shelter of my mind with little, purpose other than my words that keep me sane. These are my new poems I have written in the quiet of my night, forever wished away in a writer’s pain. As I strive to write that perfect poem that, my soul desperately seeks. Then and only then can my words rest upon a sleep. more…

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