Analysis of The Walk



The Walk
The man wobbled down the darkened street
while the wind buckled his knees to his feet
the sleet pounded off the tarnished brick walls
where he reached out for fear he might fall.

Yet he was constant with each scripted stride
as the weather worsened in the sky outside
he disappeared like sunset through the air
as I took in every step as I curiously stared.

I do not know where the man wanted to go
as he juddered through the sleet and snow
I want to believe the man is safe and well
and hope he makes it to the place he dwells.


Scheme XAAXX BBXX CCXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01 011010101 1011011111 0110101011 111111111 1111011101 10101000111 10111101 111010011110001 11111011011 11110101 11101011101 0111110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 525
Words 106
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on March 23, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Norman Wilson

IntroductionForgotten are the times the tick of a clock once chimed sobering sounds that caressed my hearts nightly dreams. As I awaken to the touch of light that burns upon a candles wick flickering my words for all to see. This drives my thoughts through the darkest of nights of loneliness that renders my quill upon parchment with ink that dances to minds and souls.Now I hear the screeching of my heart when the blue horizon covers the orb of emptiness.Within the shelter of my mind with little, purpose other than my words that keep me sane. These are my new poems I have written in the quiet of my night, forever wished away in a writer’s pain. As I strive to write that perfect poem that, my soul desperately seeks. Then and only then can my words rest upon a sleep. more…

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