Analysis of The Victum



Diamond colored coffins
cutting open souls

Could it be so often!?

An orphan offered up
to the wind

Coughing up blood

Born without love

Drug habits in place of parents

The damage to be done

Slit wrist which already exist

Steady hands for incisions
in the decisions of this world

Underneath the prisons of clouds
screaming load voices
to strike thunder and hunger
to the young and uninvited
uniting the stars falling

Hearts pouring open orbit rain
in the pains spinning dizzy
visiting hell here

A hail storm of verbal abuse
to point fingers and sting us

Conquering spirits
as big as Genghis Khan

(The world speaking to the victims)

"Get a job!"

A whole universe of
mis-judged judges
punching gavilon's
as if we sin not
in grim plots to rot away and hide away
what we've done wrong ourselves

What morsels tossed from a plate to eat
we feed the already suffering!

We too are as the weak...


Scheme AX B XX X C X B X XX XXXXD XXX XX XX X X CXAXXX XD X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (26%)
Metre 101010 10101 111110 110101 101 1011 1011 11001110 010111 11101001 1011010 00010111 0101011 10110 1110010 1010010 0100110 11010101 0011010 10011 01111001 1110011 10010 111101 01101010 101 01101 1110 101 11111 01111010101 1111001 110110111 110010100 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 882
Words 163
Sentences 4
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 5, 3, 2, 2, 1, 1, 6, 2, 1
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted on April 23, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Razon Santos

From Yonkers N.YPuerto Rican nick name Razonquiet untill knownLoves God and family... more…

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