Analysis of The senses



The things we take for granted
The senses that God has granted
without exceptions to all humans
Those who lost them value their importance

We have two eyes to see and behold
and two arms to touch and hold

We have two ears to listen more
and one mouth to talk less
and I'm still counting...
Aren't we truly blessed

Inhale and exhale
Breathe the life you were granted
Taste every sensation
Never take it for granted.


Scheme AAXX BB XXXX XAXA
Poetic Form
Metre 0111110 01011110 010101110 1111101010 111111001 0111101 11111101 011111 01110 101101 01001 1011010 1100010 1011110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 401
Words 77
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 4, 4
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on February 21, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dema Al-Obaidy

لم يعرفوني في الظلال التي تمتص لوني في جواز السفر.......وكان جرحي عندهم معرضا لسائح يعشق جمع الصور......لم يعرفوني..آه لا تتركي كفي بلا شمس.......لأن الشجر يعرفني؛ تعرفني كل اغاني المطر.......لا تتركيني شاحبا كالقمر! ......عار من الاسم من الانتماء في تربة ربيتها باليدين......ايوب صاح اليوم ملء السماء لا تجعلوني عبرة مرتين!........يا سادتي يا سادتي الانبياء لا تسألوا الاشجار عن اسمها لا تسألوا الوديان عن امها......من جبهتي ينشق سيف الضياء ومن يدي ينبع ماء النهر.........كل قلوب الناس جنسيتي.......فلتسقطوا عني جواز السفر. more…

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