Analysis of the golden ray



I used to see this golden ray
So golden I'm certain
Sneaking through the empty space
Between the two thick curtains
But now the sun's sunk into
The darkness of the gloom
The sky begins yearning to
The company of the moon
My room which was once lit
Now drowns in darkness
Coldness slowly invades it
With the loud sound of silence
I am waiting for another ray
For a new dawn to start
Before this darkness finds its way
Into my beating heart


Scheme ABCDEFEGHIHJAKAK
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 110110 1010101 0101110 1101101 010101 0101101 0100101 111111 11010 1010011 1011110 111010101 101111 01110111 011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 423
Words 84
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 353
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Submitted on January 20, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dema Al-Obaidy

لم يعرفوني في الظلال التي تمتص لوني في جواز السفر.......وكان جرحي عندهم معرضا لسائح يعشق جمع الصور......لم يعرفوني..آه لا تتركي كفي بلا شمس.......لأن الشجر يعرفني؛ تعرفني كل اغاني المطر.......لا تتركيني شاحبا كالقمر! ......عار من الاسم من الانتماء في تربة ربيتها باليدين......ايوب صاح اليوم ملء السماء لا تجعلوني عبرة مرتين!........يا سادتي يا سادتي الانبياء لا تسألوا الاشجار عن اسمها لا تسألوا الوديان عن امها......من جبهتي ينشق سيف الضياء ومن يدي ينبع ماء النهر.........كل قلوب الناس جنسيتي.......فلتسقطوا عني جواز السفر. more…

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