Analysis of THE FORGOTTEN- Homeless



THE FORGOTTEN – Homeless

As I woke up in the morning
The clouds are raging on me, without any warning

I surrender to their gestures and their threats
I remember, once I had bills to pay and the debts

But now, I'm lying on my back in open and looking at the sky
No food in my stomach and my throat is dry

There is something in the sky, because whenever you look at it with a craze
It always connects you, to your old memories and those days'

Those days of laughter, a home and pets
All I'm left with now is a mattress, one trouser and two cigarettes

Plus, an empty stomach, those old memories and now starving pain
I just wish ‘Oh Heaven' now, that it did rain

Because I don't want to show the passerby, my dark swollen eye
I hate to admit, but sometimes men too cry

As I lie down motionless,

A life, wants to exist my body because of this starvation
A silent revolution is going within me, like a self-realization
I'm a part of this human society, which is not even considered a civilization
I could be equated to a used pad, thrown after a cycle of menstruation
If I may be lucky, I may end up becoming a 10 sec topic of some dinner conversation

I still have self-respect left, not to beg anyone to give me food
Even though I m penny less and semi nude

Though I read once, that people believe in ‘Giving – as a Joy of living '.
May be that is true for only one day, of ‘Thanksgiving

Cos reality if very different, bitter and crude
Many people here are not that nice, but may be rude

I look at life from the street closely enough, to say it is ruthless
I'm the prey and I'm THE HOMELESS

@ Authored & Created by: Anup D.
P.s: http://birdscry.wordpress.com/2014/04/26/the-forgotten/


Scheme A BB CC DD EE CC FF DD A GGGGG HH BB HH AA XG
Poetic Form
Metre 001010 11110010 0111011011010 10101110011 1010111111001 11110111010010101 11011001111 1110001010101111101 11011111100011 111100101 1111110101100101 1110101110001101 11111011111 0111111010011101 11101101111 1111100 0111011100111010 0100101100111011010 101111001001111001000010 11101010111100101010 111110111101001101110010 1111011111101111 101111010101 111111001010101110 1111111011110 1101101001001 1010111111111 11111011001111110 10101010 10010111 1110010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,660
Words 326
Sentences 6
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 5, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on September 04, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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