Analysis of THE BOARDWALK (Poem #4)



On the Boardwalk at the beach there is always so much fun.
 You can ride a bike or in a surrey or walk in the sun.

A bike ride on the Boardwalk in the early morn
 Leads up to a shop with fresh-made donuts so warm.

We must leave with our bikes now the guards say.
 It's time for the beach to begin its day.

Running and laughing with sand between our toes.
 It's under the Boardwalk we all hurry to go.

A chair, an umbrella, blanket, bucket and shovel,
 Our arms are so full that we almost stumble.

Waves they are roaring, oh the sound of the surf.
 The sun is so warm, oh bless Mother earth.

An afternoon of enjoying the surf and the sun,
We are cooking hot and just about done.

Our stomachs are grumbling too much for a snack,
So a shower and it's off to dinner just like that.

Back to the Boardwalk as it soon becomes dusk.
To join in the nighttime fun is surely a must.

The lights come on and the games all begin.
Soon we're tired of walking and have to give in.

As we rest in a chair and watch the passersby,
As numerous and interesting as the stars in the sky,

We remember the events of a wonderful day;
Of the Boardwalk, the beach, the fun and the play.

(c) Copyright by Jean E. Gorney


Scheme AA XX BB XX CC XX AA XX XX DD EX BB E
Poetic Form
Metre 101101111111 111011001011001 01110100101 11101111111 11111011011 1110110111 100101101101 11001111011 0110101010010 10111111110 11110101101 0111111101 101101001001 1110101011 1010110011101 1010011110111 1101111011 11001111001 0111001101 111011001110 111001010100 11000100101001 1010001101001 1010101001 11011110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,177
Words 237
Sentences 19
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on August 11, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jean Gorney

I wrote a poem for my daughter and new son-in-law and read it at their wedding reception in 1997. People have been encouraging me ever since. I try to write up-beat and happy poetry. My poetry has been in many anthologies, newspapers, church bulletins,etc. I won a small contest once. I self-published some small(4x5)books with about 16 poems in each that can be used as greeting cards. I include an envelope for mailing. Check them out on my FB page under Jean Magill Gorney. more…

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