Analysis of Take Back The Wounds



Backwards words healing wounds

Rewinding time back
before hurt

If I could take back what has
already happen I would

Backwards words healing wounds

Sealing up the cracks left on her
broken heart

Just like mine

The same breaking, aching inside
taking in scars

The splitting mirrors image
putting bits and pieces
back in places
where we appear clear again

Backwards words healing wounds

Eyes swallowing tears

Frowns upside down
forming at the same time
the clock rewinds

Backwards words healing wounds

If I could take back
all the bad moments
and spin back the hands to
hands holding each other
unfolding a dying rose back to bloom
I would

Backwards words healing wounds

Stealing voices
in the choices we make that
break us apart

Backwards words before breaking hearts

We could start all over...


Scheme A bx xc A de x xx xffx A x xxa A bxxdxc A fxe x d
Poetic Form
Metre 101101 111 011 1111111 0101011 101101 10101110 101 111 01101001 1001 0101010 101010 1010 1101101 101101 11001 1111 101011 011 101101 11111 10110 011011 110110 0100101111 11 101101 1010 0010111 1101 10101101 111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 767
Words 137
Sentences 1
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 4, 1, 1, 3, 1, 6, 1, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 38
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on April 24, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Razon Santos

From Yonkers N.YPuerto Rican nick name Razonquiet untill knownLoves God and family... more…

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