Analysis of Shop Doorway



A last breath wheezes,
Tarnished by abuse and neglect,
Surrendering softly into cold night air.
In the distance a church service gripped by the Passion,
Knows and cares nothing for such passing.
In a time long departed a mothers joy and unbound love
For the first gasp of this fragile life,
Wrapped and cherished in warmth and comfort,
Christened by the holy church,
Now exhaled into a greater understanding.
Found, next morning, by protocol and regulation,
Too late, a brief focus of attention.
A name on a social security card, confirmed later by fingerprint.
The department store will soon be opening,
For indulgence and profit on a massive scale,
Card board, newspaper and last urine quickly fumigated,
Lest anyone should feel disturbed.
No family found, just a quick cremation, ashes not required.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIEDDJEKBLM
Poetic Form
Metre 01110 10101001 01001001111 0010011011010 101101110 001101001010011 101111101 101001010 1010101 10101010010 11101100010 1101101010 011010010010110110 00101111100 101001010101 11100110101 1101101 11001101010101010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 785
Words 132
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 647
Words per stanza (avg) 132
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Submitted on August 18, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Timothy Francis Savage

I have been writing poetry most of my life I love how so much can be said using so little. I am not a literary person but have always enjoyed this form which drips out of me, for reasons I can’t explain, almost constantly. I have written poems to try and explain this like Surfers Block, Special Presents and Oasis. I spent my youth in East Africa and poems like African Night and African Rain are reflections from those times. Now 55yrs old and a retired London policeman the poems Dawn and Black Rain were actually about finding a body in the early hours and homelessness in London in Pinched Freedom and Shop Doorway. I am also interested in the concepts of space and eternity which can be seen in poems like An Uneasy Rock and Macrocosm . I also like deserts for their timelessness and brutal beauty portrayed in Hour Glass and Sinai. My Grandfather fought right through the First War and as a youngster I saw how it had so deeply affected his life. I have always been very proud of him as I have of my father. Poems like Half Fat White No Sugar, Welcome Home 1918, Musical Credits, and A present from The Bad Lands about a tie pin my father brought back for me from the Bad Lands reflect some of these feelings. Another subject that intrigues me is the history of mankind because I just don’t buy the way historians/Archaeologists’ tell our story. I write a bit about this in Long Before Lucy, Inconvenient Truth and Gulf of Khambhat. I have written some nature poems also like Kingfisher, Chameleon, Spring, Another Winter,Tiger man, Eagle and Feathers On Water. If anyone wants to talk to me about anything I have written you can get me on timsavage007@hotmail.com I will always visit your site and read your poems if you comment on mine. One of my recent poems 'Eagle' has been placed on a new web site for classic Times Crossword puzzles. If like me you like these wonderful puzzles have a look at the most challenging crosswords available. Licensed by The Times. Investigate the cryptic complexity of the English word. www.akomcrosswords.com more…

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