Analysis of She ascends,she descends
rhythms of love
flicker through her nipples riding the
wavy waves of lustful romance
Teeth tighten,arms wide spread,peachy lips
Quaver;She waves far away
She calls my name from the crests of melted
maze;I keep drowing in(her)love lake
O she keeps rescuing me breaking stormy waves
Nelam,Nelam,Nelam tonight Arti`s untame
She tears me up right and left
Tears of love drops trickle down her lovelane
Desire desperate undo all due,dress;ripples
Of orgasms pass through her naked Veins
I get stuck forever in her Prem
Galaxies of desire undress `neath her Veils
She makes me infinite;she makes Endless
I see geyser of love-lava erupting through
Her eyelash;She moves,She moans
Moon`s numb,deaf-mute;summer breeze cool her
down;she ascends,she descends
| Scheme | XX A X X X X X B X X A X B X X X X X X |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1011 101010100 10111001 11111 11101 1111101110 1110011 111100110101 10111 1111101 111110101 010100111 1100110101 111010001 100101001101 1111110 11101110101 0111 111110 1101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 728 |
| Words | 130 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 19 |
| Stanza Lengths | 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 20 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 32 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 6 |
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Submitted on June 12, 2010
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