Analysis of She ascends,she descends

rhythms of love
flicker through her nipples riding the

wavy waves of lustful romance

Teeth tighten,arms wide spread,peachy lips

Quaver;She waves far away

She calls my name from the crests of melted

maze;I keep drowing in(her)love lake

O she keeps rescuing me breaking stormy waves

Nelam,Nelam,Nelam tonight Arti`s untame

She tears me up right and left

Tears of love drops trickle down her lovelane

Desire desperate undo all due,dress;ripples

Of orgasms pass through her naked Veins

I get stuck forever in her Prem

Galaxies of desire undress `neath her Veils

She makes me infinite;she makes Endless

I see geyser of love-lava erupting through

Her eyelash;She moves,She moans

Moon`s numb,deaf-mute;summer breeze cool her

down;she ascends,she descends

Scheme XX A X X X X X B X X A X B X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 101010100 10111001 11111 11101 1111101110 1110011 111100110101 10111 1111101 111110101 010100111 1100110101 111010001 100101001101 1111110 11101110101 0111 111110 1101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 728
Words 130
Sentences 1
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 32
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

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