Analysis of Sail beyond the sunset



SAIL BEYOND THE SUNSET
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Sometimes it is very hard to repeat the life progression
Multifaceted fascinating roller coaster of colored emotions
Intimacies and distances within the family's healthy relations
Engaging,rewarding and perpetual events of infinite promotions

I can't believe I ate the whole sea food of my prized ocean
I was compelled to listen the words of wise senior's explosion
Soon one generation will pass away gently with deep devotion
New fast courageous generation will rule with profound implosion

Something always misses in life of prize or promise connection
Sometimes,Get a break to have good luck is a saintly suggestion
And to hold your horses with enough rope is lively sharp direction
To watch the beauty of all the cups and lips is an open attraction

Sometimes some players just watch the game of worldly edition
Some bat for some one to avoid their everlasting myth perdition

~~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~


Scheme X ABBB AAAA AAAA AA X
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1 011110110101010 01001001010110010 1010001010010010 100100011100010 110111011111110 110111001111010 1101011011011010 1101001011101010 101100111110010 10111111010010 01111010111101010 110101101011110010 011101101110010 11111101101011 110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 934
Words 153
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on March 31, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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