Analysis of Proud Life



I saw the yellow leaf down river land
 some was out and some was inside sand
 I became wonder to seen their life
 there were indication of demise of leaf

My eye goes on near tree jade leaf
 as all were moving like others fend
 One of them has kaput as came down
 beside to same yellow leaf rand

look like first was questioning with him
 how did you ruptured with leaf's joined
 he said a powerful blow coming towards
us and only have busted me from grand

first said your youth has defunct and
 now you have to wait for death taste
 would not proud on youth and breath
 /after the demise, it cannot be mend


Scheme AAXB BCXA XXXA XXXC
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011101 111011011 101101111 1001010111 11111111 110101101 11111111 01111011 111110011 11110111 11010011001 1010110111 11111010 11111111 1111101 1000111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 592
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on October 12, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Zafar Iqbal

Poem writing is my hobby though English is not my mother tongue but am love to write in English to convey my feelings with whole world. here is my message for entire world peoples. Hatred could never win over the world; it is love which can conquer the stone-hearted opponents. This world can be turned into paradise with peace and love, for love begets love. more…

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