Analysis of On The Horizon



He hates this life of crime
But here he feels trapped.
He is surrounded and thinks he can't climb,
His fear makes him handicapped.
A good hearted policeman
Tells him he can change.
Get out he can,
His life to rearrange.
His courage is weak,
His life is fragile.
He dares not speak,
His lips are not agile.
Something more he does seek,
For his life to be worthwhile.
Can he really be good?
He wonders because someone told him he could.


Scheme ABABCDEDFGFGFHII
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11111 1101001111 111110 0110010 11111 1111 11101 11011 11110 1111 111110 101111 1111111 111011 1100111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 419
Words 82
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 338
Words per stanza (avg) 82
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Submitted on November 23, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jessica Sipes

I really enjoy writing poetry. My favorite styles are free verse and sonnet. I hope you enjoy them!Please note: These poems are bassed on life or things in general and do not necaserally reflect my own life, actions or feelings. more…

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