Analysis of North of a rural town



On a humped stone bridge
 north of a rural town
 beneath the green hills
at the walls end

Where a valley strewn
 and a glacier dragged
 forked through deaf dunes
 in an anxious sweep

The scattered granite spits
 above on a green sleeve
 soft splints of sand stone
 almost hidden in moist moss

Where a bard cries tears
 into hands like scratched wood
 whiskey drops splashing
 on his hobnailed boots

Crying for the wind to stop
 and leave him less reminded
 but the daisy shins shimmer
 as the thistle weeds wave

COPYRIGHT 2013 CLIFTON REDMOND


Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 110101 01011 1011 10101 00101 1111 01101 010101 011011 11111 110011 10111 011111 10110 1111 1010111 0111010 1010110 101011 101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 527
Words 95
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on March 01, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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