Analysis of Nelam reads numbers



Neelam reads numbers;arti kills kumar-
Love gondola strings out songs sha,la,la
upon the bluey canals of Venive,Vienna-
Nelam yields in sweet Savanna;arti urges
endless prayers
Faiths,fate,future fry open on the fry-pan
of Dream,Desire
Oh my love pearly drops fall,fall,fall-
Shooting stars pierce open every virgin`s
virginal mall;You come,You go,leaving behind
memories,rights,wrongs and after you`re dead a
few tears is shed and a few prayers prayed
After 100 years nobody remembers-
What remains is your lonely,forlorn remnant
floating timeless in the vaults of Silence,
Darknes,and Blackholes unprecedented
Nelam,Nelam,Nelam what I need,I don`t need
What I crave,I don`t get
Your sister`s lips are so tulips,virgin
vigilant and full-moon-monsoon full-blown!


Scheme ABCDECABDFBGHIJKLMCC
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 111101 1100111010 010100111 1101110 101 11101011 11 1111011 1011101001 10011101 1010110 111100111 1011010 10111110 1010001110 110100 111111 11111 111111 1000110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 743
Words 129
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 624
Words per stanza (avg) 107
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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