Analysis of My Thoughts At Dusk
Ash gray clouds
Like sunset was a wildfire.
Remember the embers
Hued amber.
Immense energy to entropy,
Particles scattered
Obscure sadness surges like the surf
A high tide in my mind,
So I hide inside my hole.
Substance is sustenance
To a busted head
Insane already,
Steadily growing slower
Creeping to a slug crawl
With slime trailing behind
Remnants of mad memories
Tainting time
Gnaw my nails to nothing,
Stubby digits subtly hinting
To my metaphysical misery, existential agony
Longing for this rubbish to be published
Eternal glory, my story, a memoir
Tell-all and air the dirty laundry
A gory self portrait masterpiece
Painted in my blood and tears
Scheme | ABCBDEFGHIJDBKGLMNNDOPDQR |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 111 111010 010010 110 011001100 10010 011010101 011011 1110111 101100 10101 01010 1001010 101011 111001 1011100 101 111110 101010010 11010010010100 1011101110 0101011001 110101010 01011010 1001101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 630 |
Words | 109 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 25 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 535 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 109 |
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Submitted on March 07, 2015
Modified on March 05, 2023
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