Analysis of MY PUPPY, NO MINE (Poem #249)



A cute little puppy was running up and down the street
When two little brothers came running out to meet.
I saw him first the younger boy started to shout;
But, I'm the older one the other boy said with clout.

I can feed him and walk him the younger seemed to beg,
As the litle puppy in his excitement went (oops) on his leg.
Then the boys laughing both soon agreed.
It may take two little boys to fill this little dog's need.

© copyright 8/1/1999 by Jean E. Gorney


Scheme AABB CCDD X
Poetic Form
Metre 01101011010101 111010110111 111101011011 1101010101111 1111011010111 1010100101011111 101101101 11111011111011 1011110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 458
Words 91
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on October 07, 2013

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Jean Gorney

I wrote a poem for my daughter and new son-in-law and read it at their wedding reception in 1997. People have been encouraging me ever since. I try to write up-beat and happy poetry. My poetry has been in many anthologies, newspapers, church bulletins,etc. I won a small contest once. I self-published some small(4x5)books with about 16 poems in each that can be used as greeting cards. I include an envelope for mailing. Check them out on my FB page under Jean Magill Gorney. more…

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