Analysis of My heart



Eyes sparkle like a stream
she often comes in my dreams
her face like moonlight beams
lips as red as a rose they seem

Crowning glory her shining hair
Her features intoxicating fare
average height by compare
Her portrait here set with care

she is only created for me
she belonged to other loam
her heart palpitate for me
that is looking very groom

my spouse is outlying from me
my mind remains for her deem
if she come everything shine
without her my heart is gloom

Oh air! you go through fast
pass my message to her room
come fast in my banish land
without you cannot bloom


Scheme ABBA CCCC DXDE DAXE XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 110101 1101011 01111 11110111 10100101 01001001 1001101 0101111 111001011 1011101 0110011 1110101 1111011 1101101 111101 0101111 111111 1110101 1101101 011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 554
Words 109
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on March 02, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Zafar Iqbal

Poem writing is my hobby though English is not my mother tongue but am love to write in English to convey my feelings with whole world. here is my message for entire world peoples. Hatred could never win over the world; it is love which can conquer the stone-hearted opponents. This world can be turned into paradise with peace and love, for love begets love. more…

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