Analysis of My Ever dearest Original




                                      My Ever dearest

You're just an alive inspiration of my life,
 A dearest treasure and nothing to be paired.
 The bright light of love has shown with in my heart;
 Since you've not yet part in my life.

In every moment you're in my side,
 Everything are so beautiful in my sight.
 Once you smile and cares meekly and lovely,
 Seemed I've joyously floating in the sky.

For every problem that I've been faced,
 You're always in my side ready to let me comfort.
 Just for everything in perseverance and of disappointment,
 But it that event you're rendering your abatable  assessment.

But what kind of hidden power do you have?
That you'll not easily be torn in my heart.
 I didn't say you may disturb in my heart and study,
 It's just like this, yet how'll to be expressed.

Anything bitter and persecution had it been,
 If it will give you joy I'm willing to take and accept.
I rather live like smoke, present today, perish tomorrow;
Than to live a hundred years without knowing you.

Vast portion in my heart whatever valor,
 That  it does just acquire with something essential;
 Thus, I would not be selfish to you my dear.
 My Dearest one, to change, Oh! never I can!


Scheme X AXBA XXCX XXDD XBCX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 11101010111 01010010111 01111111011 11111011 0100101011 1011100011 1110110010 11110001 1100101111 110111011110 1110001001010 11101110011010 11111010111 11110011011 11011101011010 1111111101 10100010111 11111111011001 11011110011001 111010101101 1100111010 1111010110010 11111101111 11011111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,192
Words 212
Sentences 15
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Ging Alburo D.

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