Analysis of Moonlit Mountains



I stand here looking at the setting sun
That's just about to drop from out of sight
Yet soon to recognize, when it is done,
The always rising of the moon at night.

To see it creep above the curving east
And feel refreshing chill of dusk and slow
The landscape underneath completely fleeced
With silver light that makes the shadows grow.

And it's a sight to see the aspen trees
Take on themselves, each leaf, the evening strange;
With flooding darkness all about their knees,
The mountains over Colorado change.

Far up above the spruce cross tundra grass
 See moonlight silhouetting Eagle Pass.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
Poetic Form Shakespearean sonnet 
Metre 1111010101 1101111111 111101111 011010111 1111010101 0101011101 01010101 110111011 0101110101 1101110101 1101010111 010100101 1101011101 111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 581
Words 104
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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