Analysis of Melville and my Sight



Once again, at the begin again,
Travel wondered if he could trust my eyes
As I begged him to expect another rally,
Another return. To the point which
I wondered if I loved myself,
Or simply adored my other
Half as it circled before me-
Dancing incandescent in the scavenger room.

Melville felt the presence of Bartleby,
He told me so as I swooned in simile-
Certainly deceived by prognostication
A slim chance invaded my steps
Forcing a change of course, a turnabout
Mother called "stopping for dinner".

Melville was riding a passage,
A naturalist dissecting life forms
I plumed and gawked to be character-
"What are we having?" in a moment's pause.


Scheme XXAXXBAX XAXXXB XXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 101100101 1010111111 111110101010 010011011 1101111 11001110 11110011 10010001001 10101011 111111101 1000110010 01101011 100111010 10110110 10110010 0100001011 110111100 1111000101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 632
Words 114
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 172
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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