Analysis of Loser



Waterfall lying down smoothly towards lake
 fishes are going deep with dominant pressure
 When it falls down their trawl in deep in rake
 Searching for others victuals to deep in seek
 The fisherman was hunting in the bank of lake
 Hunt fishes, would bake it for lunch as well
 dine, He put his fishing weapon in pond waits
 while he is waiting to grab healthy and take
 up, he felt the hook are heavy he pulled up
 got stout fish, he jumped up with glad face
 he took it out and had planned to how to cook
 then enjoy with stout fish, he would be pack
 meanwhile the eagle jumped on stout fish and
 took up and vanished on sky, the hunters was
 let down and would go back without fish bake


Scheme ABACADEAFGHIJKA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1010110011 101101110010 1111110101 1011011101 01011000111 1101111111 11111010011 11110111001 11101110111 111111111 11110111111 1011111111 101011110 11010110101 1101110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 676
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 539
Words per stanza (avg) 132
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Submitted on March 01, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Zafar Iqbal

Poem writing is my hobby though English is not my mother tongue but am love to write in English to convey my feelings with whole world. here is my message for entire world peoples. Hatred could never win over the world; it is love which can conquer the stone-hearted opponents. This world can be turned into paradise with peace and love, for love begets love. more…

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