Analysis of Living together is not so easy




You and I were good together
so why we did break up?
differences did kill our love
the past cannot be solved
our feelings were strong
but we ran too fast
to start to live together
while we needed our space

I am not made for living together
but can be good friends with
all kind of human beings
to share lots of good things
for me this is of importance
than living with just one man
to share my life with in agony
because I cannot be me

I found a way to have a good life
on my own without a man
and it is of more value
than when I was with him
lots of people gain from this
my energy and love is for them
and not anymore for one person
spilling it just like that


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 638
Words 140
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 174
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted by Jet-Rood on July 28, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jet Rood

2023: In a world full of chaos, creativity is one of the helping things to keep yourself sane. ******************************** 2014: A good head and a good heart are always a formidable combination. But when you add to that a literate tongue or pen than you have something very special. - Nelson Mandela - ******************************** I am from the land of tulips and mills. Writing is a need like eating and sleeping. I think we are all wondrous creatures who deserve to love ourselves and live in freedom. I like to participate in cases which can make a difference for myself, my surroundings and the earth. My wish: humanity in a non-dualistic society. more…

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