Analysis of laying my best



,,,I had no regret doing my hearty cheers,
,,,my past is buried with absent of scars of agony,
,,,i feast on my tomorrow,
,,,dream about glowing like a bird.

,,,seeing like i have the world in my palm,
,,,exercising my interest is my desire,
,,,while criticising my duty,
,,,stengthens me.

,,,So rain it on me,your cocking stories,
,,,and color my name in black,
,,,take me into querries of un-found truth,
,,,judge your standing shadow that fell before you,

,,,But i remain my future,my hope is sprouting more,
,,,i will rise and sweat like i'm forced to,
,,,yet my focus takes me beyond,
,,,your imaginable nightmare,

,,,There!...up above the mountain top,
,,,shall i look down,seeing the crumbs of,
,,,my past then laughs....
,,,the harvest of my best.


Scheme XAXX XXAA XXXB XBXX XXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11101101101 11110110111100 111101 10110101 1011101011 10011011010 11110 11 111111010 0101101 110111111 1110111011 11011111101 111011111 11101101 1010001 1010101 1111011 1111 010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 736
Words 130
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Dumka Vincent

I am a lover of poem.I love to read and write and my first letter was addressed to my headmaster,requested that he assist my mother to pay off my school exammination fee.At the age 6 years,I had already started writing my short story books.But though,some life experiences had also contributed towards my continuous effort to face the challenges of life.I had written series of prose,articles andwith my little experienced poetry is part of my whole life,when I sing in poetry,speak in poetry,settle scores in poetry,discuss in poetry etc.My dedication towards poetry out of my utmost concern is to be Known for my credibility,participatory efforts in my personal achievement and divine from God.Poetry is part of my life.May poetry.com live on (Dumka Richard Vincent.L more…

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