Analysis of Killer Kisses



Killer Kisses
By: ForeverSwt727

Are you out to kill
Or will you use your power and your skill
to save more lives
as you refuse to sell wives

Tired of seeing the good become bad
because it only increases my sad
and why are people so mad
when I am just looking for my lad

What is there left to do?
when I just try my best to be true.
Is it really that hard to say i love you?
Will it hurt you too?

All I need to you killer kiss
or else I pace around looking for what I miss
Are you going to be there to give me bliss
or make me cry and punch you with my fist?

I am so lost in this life
and want to just cook with a knife
to feed us love and be a happy wife,
but why is crime a rife?

Arrest me, caress me or just let me be
that wonderful woman that you dont see
because you are blinded from wrong
and I just want you to sing a song

The name of it is your own game
Because I am sick of seeing you be so lame
when I want richness and you just want fame
why do you look at me to be the blame

When I grow up,
I will show you wassup
because I will do whatever I can
to blow you a fuckin killer fan

This wind will knock you out
and quit your pout
as you fuckin scream and shout
until you hear what I am all about

And you will see the smile
while you stop being like Kyle,
that troublemaker with A.D.D.
Do you want to be like he?

Why are you letting yourself down
When I am just trying to stop that frown
as I want you to know I am your clown
to make you happy as you sleep in a gown

Dream away to a better day tomorrow
as time will bleed away your sorrow
and let you live another day
another life for us today

Please be grateful for us all
as I will always wait for your call
whether is is silently or loud
or even if I am in a cloud

Life is full of shit
and sometimes it is a miss or a hit
and I will strike for a home run
until I see you have some fun

Stop lying to yourself
and see me be myself
because I want you to be great
even if I am always late

Time is within us
even if you dont know how to take a bus
as long as you stop this fuss
and avoid the words of cuss

Life can be a curse
but or you hoping for better or worse
because I am looking for the light
to think life is so bright

Yet the clouds create more rain
and make life unclear with a stain
so clean up and do your laundry
and test how strong is your own foundry.

Keep swimming in this sea
of life that never lets us be
the way we wish to see it
But as long as you smile to each fit

Then life will let you escape
as you create your own movie tape
and sell it for a pot of gold
to get rid of all this sick lies and cold.

Whatever it takes to help you stay breathing, take that risk and try harder each day to stay alive as we grow to be stronger, smarter, sexier, younger and loving! <3

Please love me infinity and beyond,

<3 ~* ForeverSwt727 * ~ <3


Scheme XA BBXX AAAA ACCA DDDA EEEE FFGG HHHH IIJJ AAAA KKAF LLLL MMAA NNAA AAOO PPAA QQQQ RRAA SSFF FFAA TTAA X A A
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 11 11111 1111110011 1111 1101111 1011001011 0111001011 0111011 111110111 111111 111111111 11101111111 11111 11111101 111101101111 11101111111 1111011111 1111011 01111101 1111010101 111101 01101111111 1100101111 01111011 011111101 01111111 011111101111 1111001111 1111111101 1111 11111 011111011 11101101 111111 0111 111101 0111111101 011101 1111011 110011 1111111 11110011 1111101111 1111111111 11110111001 1011010101 111101110 01110101 01011101 1110111 11111111 101110011 110111001 11111 0011101101 01111011 01111111 110101 01111 01111111 1011111 11011 10111111101 1111111 0010111 11101 1111011011 011110101 111111 1010111 01101101 11101110 011111110 110011 11110111 0111111 111111111 1111101 110111101 01110111 1111111101 1011111110111011011110111111101010010010 1110100001 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,727
Words 615
Sentences 14
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 85
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on March 22, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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