Analysis of Just

Anny McNeilus 1982 (Minnesota)



Just breathe in and breathe out-
Try to resist the urge to shout.
Unable to see through the curtains of fog...
Move carefully, tread light, do not become swallowed into the bog.
Allow all thoughts to leave your mind.
Now hypnotized, you are in a trance, inside of you there is nothing left to find...
Your tears and hurt have left you now...
The audience claps, now take a bow.
Empty inside, feeling nothing.
No baggage left, no sadness left to bring...
Are you enjoying feeling no pain?
Perhaps, if you could think-you might wonder... If I am insane...


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 110011 11010111 01011101011 1100111101100101 01111111 1101100101111110111 11011111 010011101 10011010 1101110111 110101011 011111111011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 542
Words 99
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 421
Words per stanza (avg) 99
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Submitted on February 23, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Anny McNeilus

Writing since the 9th grade I think... LoL best time for a girl to find an outlet... And I just Love words.. I'd like to expand to song writing as well-though I'm a bit clueless on the how-to... Any helpful hints and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated-I'm loving this site-as I am broadening my spectrum on what can b defined as poetry... Thank u all for sharing n for giving my words a chance to flow more…

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