Analysis of journey of life



No faces ful lof smiles greet me
On this path of live and learn
Empty frowns and chissiled glares
Portraits and masks of reluctent stare

The pavement beats my every sodden step
Alarm sounds strike my fragile ear
The persistant rain that beats me down
And the clothes heavy as soaking sponge

The furious wind that tears and batters me
As the path now takes sudden a climb
Muscles tiring as bones they ache
Through the battle i arrive my soul can shine


Scheme AXXX XXXX AXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11011111 1111101 101011 1001111 01011100101 01111101 0111111 001101101 01001110101 101111001 10101111 10101011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 439
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 28
Font size:
 

Submitted on November 30, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

24 sec read
1

clifton redmond

I am tiring of the hardship of this site i will be posting less here if you wish me to review your poems here or just share your work with me you can do so by looking me up on facebook, i hope this site is fixed soon as i have learned so much here and have made so many countless friends here, most of you i already see on facebook, but the ones who i have not found i urge you to find me more…

All clifton redmond poems | clifton redmond Books

0 fans

Discuss this clifton redmond poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "journey of life" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 18 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/75946/journey-of-life>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    12
    days
    17
    hours
    57
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    And miles to go before I _______
    A sleep
    B dream
    C end
    D rest