Analysis of I'm so sorry I make you cry



I'm so sorry make you
cry please don't hate me
how can I make up to you.
Please forgive baby.
I don't like to see you
sad? When you hurt I hurt
to.I was cry when written
this poetry.I'm so sorry
for not understand.
Help me to understand
more.Yes I know you love me.
Please God help me I don't
want to lose him.
Please God help me to talk him.
I'm one baby.
I never want to brought pain to you
I'm sorry.
Baby don't hate me.I want you to be man.
I love you so much. I want to take the
pain way. Please forgive me


Scheme ABABACDBEEBFGGBABHIB
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111011 11111 1111111 10110 111111 111111 111110 11110 1101 11101 111111 111111 1111 1111111 1110 110111111 110 1011111111 1111111110 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 492
Words 112
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 380
Words per stanza (avg) 108
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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