Analysis of I love him

I lie awake in bed staring
blankly into darkness.
My eyes i cannot close,
too many thoughts in my head.
So much swirling in my mind
the soft music playing
ideas for poems,him.
Thoughts of him fill me.
I love him very much.
I smile in the darkness at thoughts
of him.He sparks a happiness in
me i never knew existed.
With him i laugh and smile,
truly happy in every way.
I finally drift to sleep with thoughts
of him.Please don't let me go.
I need you in my life and don't
say good-bye to me.I will allways have
a sad face if you walk way from me.

Poetic Form
Metre 11010110 100110 111101 1101011 1110011 011010 01011 11111 111101 11001011 11101000 11101010 111101 101001001 110011111 111111 11101101 11111111 011111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 528
Words 113
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 420
Words per stanza (avg) 109
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 23, 2023

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