Analysis of I Hope It Storms When I Die



Some people really hate rainstorms
 I think they're not right in the head
I always laugh at those sillies
Who run to hide under their bed

I love it when it storms hard
I can hear the rain hitting the tin
I runout on the porch to watch rain fall
I'd rather be out now, than in

I smile at the flash of the lightning
I cheer at the crack of the thunder
Like angels are taking my picture
Then knocking bowling pins asunder

I danc eout into the raindrops
I spin with my arms open wide
I laugh as I jump in the puddles
I make faces at people inside

I lift my arms to the heavens
The rain fogs my eyes made of glass
I slip in the mud the rain causes
I laugh and fal right on my......well you know

Some people reallyu hate rainstorms
I laugh as I watch them run by
I'll love storms till I'm 90
And I hope it storms when I die


Scheme ABAB XCXC XDDD XEXE XXXX AFXF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1101011 11111001 111111 11111011 1111111 111011001 111011111 11011110 111011010 111011010 110110110 110101010 1110101 11111101 111110010 111011001 11111010 01111111 110010110 110111111 110111 11111111 11111 01111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 794
Words 171
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted by CoachSpivey on February 21, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brian Spivey

I've been writing for nearly 40 years. It's been a good ride. Hope you enjoy. I have one series of poems that should be read together. "A Sad Fairy Tale", "Happily", "A New Fairy Tale Begins", and "The Result of True Love". As the Staler Brothers sang "Some I wrote for money, some I wrote for fun, some I wrote and threw away, and never sang for anyone. One I wrote for Mama, and a couple still aren't through, I've lost track of all the rest but the most I wrote for you." Enjoy. more…

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