Analysis of Her Purest Trick



I watch trembling
leaf shadows on the wall
and feel that I can cope
with winter and the dark

if the sun still
bounds along the hall
like golden retrievers
in the frosty park

astounding light
climbs the wooden door
and creeps across
the kitchen table

like soothing waves
licking the shore,
always moving,
never stable;

yet her gentle knock
never seems to come
I know the bell
is no longer working

the sound of love
is a distant drum,
rarely seen, though
it might be lurking

there is some comfort
in this draughty light
even when the clouds
are damp and thick

she can still surprise
in soft dreams at night,
quivering beauty –
her purest trick


Scheme ABXC XBXC DEXF XEAF XGXA XGXA XDXH XDXH
Poetic Form
Metre 11100 11101 011111 110001 1011 10101 110010 00101 0101 10101 0101 01010 1101 1001 110 1010 10101 10111 1101 111010 0111 10101 1011 11110 11110 0111 10101 1101 11101 01111 10010 0101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 612
Words 118
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on January 25, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Paul Judges

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