Analysis of Heaven's Gorgeous Sides



Betwixt and between she slips along birdsong,
a curved approach whistles in her soft red hair,
coloured shapes giggle triangles through oblongs
while day's light takes its plight across evening's flair.

Fascination sips on fragrance's quavers
with trembled lips of blissful magical smiles,
fantasies stir seasoned sound around flavours
then tickle Heaven's gorgeous sides for awhile.

Photographic scenery; orange beauty,
whips pleasure up in delicacy's rolled gold,
she steps into a dream; the future's fancy
as musical nature frees secrets of old.

A quick grin on her chin splashes smooth oiled skin,
notions collide with her motion's collapsed laugh,
flutters dance fast stutters on love's tanned napkin,
she composes another wild paragraph.

Poetical kisses flow in prose wishes
then curl Autumn's twirl on the edge of her breast,
she's free in delight under the sky's arches,
there are no worries to be gently caressed.


Scheme XABA BBBX XCBC DEDE BFBF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 0100111011 01011000111 101101011 11111101101 01011110 11011101001 1001101011 11010101101 0101001010 11010111 11010101010 11001011011 01110110111 1001101011 10111011110 1010010110 11010110 11101101101 11001100110 11110111001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 903
Words 144
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on January 05, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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