Analysis of Hardships!!!!



For the days I was “hard up”
“Hard won” earnings gone up
It is not “harm less lie”
Never get hurt If I cry
I am “harping away at someone”
Is my fault, that is cruel some
Sometimes I was a “has been”
I was flourishing very green
I never “hassled someone”
But I was treated awesome
I was prey of “hate crime”
It ruined my sublime
I never believed in “hateful comment”
Then why I am pushed to repent?
It is not my “hateful expression”
Certainly I am dealt with aggression
I was “hauled someone over the coals”
I was played like dolls
Now I “have conniption”
I am unlawful rejection
In the environment of “hate crime”
Very difficult to invent sublime………………
Inverted comma contains phrases, see the meaning in that context……..


Scheme AABBCDEFCDGGHHCCIJCCGGK
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111 111011 111111 1011111 11100111 11111101 0111011 11100101 110101 1111010 111111 110101 1100101010 11111101 111110010 1001111010 11111001 11111 111010 11010010 000100111 1010010101 01010011010100110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 763
Words 133
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 552
Words per stanza (avg) 133
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Submitted on August 21, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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