Analysis of HAMAR GAON(MY VILLAGE) BHOJPURI Alocal indian dialect............
Ukhia ka khetwa ka tut gail aas re
Aaj hamar manwa bhail ba udaas re
Matia ka gharwa se bhail banwas re
Zindagania ka sab mit gail aas re
Koiria ka bolia se ab kahan madhumas re
Aaj hamar manwa bhail ba udaas re
Sarson ka phulwa me ketna ulhas re
Kahe hamar manwa itna udas re
Amwa ke mojra me bhar gail mithas re
Koilia ka boliya me kahan ba mithas re
Choot gail angana dwaria udas re
Ab hamar gaona se bhail banwas re
Pinjra me ban chirai ka jiwan bhail naas re
Sab okar sangi sathi baithal ba udaas re
Sagar sagar ghoom aili, bujhal nahi pyas re
Gaoan ki pania me ketana mithas re
Choot gail deswa, sangi nahi paas re
Aaj hamar manwa bhail ba udas re
Apni matia me sutla ka aas re
Jabbe hamar hontwa ka bujhi pyas re
Petwa ke pherwa me jeewan ka naas re
Ab hamar manwa bhail ba udas re
Toot gail manwa ujad gail khotwa
Chirai ka jiyara bahute udas re……..
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| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11111111 10111111 1111111 111111111 111110111 10111111 1111111 1011111 11111111 111101111 111111 1010101111 111111111 11111111 0101111111 1111111 1111111 10111111 1111111 10111111 11111111 10111111 111111 111111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 851 |
| Words | 175 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 24 |
| Lines Amount | 24 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 679 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 174 |
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Submitted on August 19, 2017
Modified on March 05, 2023
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