Analysis of Halloween Mischief



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Ernie, with mischief written on his face
And wagon in tow, crept around gates
Into a forbidden apple orchard,
Intent on filling his wagon with fruit.

He climbed trees, slithered down trunks,
Picked the biggest, shiniest apples.
The deeper into the orchard he went,
The more he heard strange forewarnings:

"Please leave, orchard masters are coming.
They count the apples, as boys do marbles."
The boy laughed as voices spoke as one:
"Please leave, never steal apples again."

Ernie, with wagon laden with apples,
Began his journey home. A witch appeared,
Demanding one-half the apples plus four.
The child in tears did as told and went on.

A twig snapped as a goblin stepped to
The side of Ernie, demanding one-half
And four of the remaining red apples.
The frightened child obeyed and hurried on.

As he was about to leave the orchard,
A troll approached and told Ernie to give
Him one-half of the last of the fruit
And four more. The boy again did as told.

Ernie left the orchard with two apples.
He ran and thought about all those apples,
But simply did not recall how many
He had before the witch appeared, do you?

Copyright 2005-2009 by author


Scheme A BXCD XEXB AEXX EXXF GXEF CXDX EEXG X
Poetic Form Etheree  (23%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1001011001110101010111001001010111001010 1011010111 010011011 0101001010 0111011011 111111 1010110 0100101011 011111 111010110 1101011110 011110111 111011001 1011010110 0111010101 0101101011 0101111011 011101011 0111001011 0110010110 0101010101 1110111010 0101011011 111101101 0110101111 1010101110 1101011110 110111110 1101010111 10110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,266
Words 230
Sentences 17
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 30, 2023

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