Analysis of Good Morning



Alive - I breathe under Heaven's gaze,
reaching for feathered embrace,
I find myself embedded under foreign sky:
waving clouds upon this stretched smile,
a subtle wind caresses these veins
that dance the beauty within sunshine.
Droplets of energy sparkle like life,
soaking my bed with miraculous scenes,
minute, another world speeding through
this slow growth I saturate in.

The pillow's soft voice
whispers oceans
across the turn of my lips.

Winding, streaming through God's fingers,
I lick His power and set free existence.
Freedom laughs surf into wide expanse,
ripples of ecstasy sings to stars recording
every path I twist and turn into fiercely.
Rainbows reflect movement, I bridge them
with wondrous ease and glide through colours.

Birdsong quickly seeks
the sheet's crease
below this naked opened hand.

Bubbling grins, I float towards the light,
spherical delight seduces the spirit
screaming emotion's blissful warmth.
Explosions of morning slip secrets
into the curtain's rich fabric, threads uncurl
and store the reasons why in patterns.

Eyes slip from dreaming, yawns of yes
gather the soul's lines in slowly,
fragments chase time through the ceiling
as the new day sighs, good morning.


Scheme AXXBXXXXXX XXX XXXCDXA XXX XXXXBX XDCC
Poetic Form
Metre 011110101 1011001 11101010101 10101111 010101011 11010011 1011001011 1011101001 100101101 1111100 0111 1010 0101111 10101110 11110011010 101101101 101100111010 100111010110 10110111 11010111 1101 011 01110101 1001110101 100011010 101101 010110110 010111011 010101010 11110111 10011010 10111010 10111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,167
Words 190
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 10, 3, 7, 3, 6, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on June 04, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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