Analysis of Gained...



Who hasnt been through some heart felt pain,
who hasnt cried on their knees in the rain?

We've all shed many tears,
been scared by our fears.

We may have different ways of living,
 but God has one way of teaching,
it doesnt matter what anyone is preaching.

Pay attention closely to the voice within,
there is where Jesus explains the worldly & Spiritual sin.

The right that we dont do is wrong,
it doesnt matter how you sing your song.

The sun gives the day to the night,
now the moon & stars shine dimly bright.

A twinkling from far away,
I pray your day went okay.

In the distance the seas crash against walls of stone,
like emotions & feelings do when theey're left alone.

Let not the site be your worry,
behind closed eyes is another story.

With your hands crossed,
pray with me for the lost.

Having been there & done that in life,
wisdom is knowledge gained from the strife...


Scheme AA XX BBB CC DD EE FF GG HH II JJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 111111001 111101 111101 1111001110 11111110 1110110110 10101010101 111100101010001 01111111 111011111 01101101 10111101 01001101 111111 001001101111 101010111101 11011110 0111101010 1111 111101 10111101 101101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 859
Words 165
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on July 10, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Donald Vess

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