Analysis of Fresh Drawn Bathwater



How can I be cool
Enough for you
When I see that face
In the pools and puddles
And oil stained avenues?

When will I wait
Too long for you
For you to feel me
When you move through halls and shadows
And fresh drawn bathwater?


Scheme XAXXX XAXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (50%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 11111 0111 11111 001010 01110 1111 1111 11111 1111101 0111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 214
Words 46
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 5
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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