Analysis of for the ones we lost
morning noon night
time fades away
so does the people on the face of this earth
how sad it is I walked passed you not even with a notice
when you smiled I was far in a frown
when you cried I was high in a clown
and trapped in the clouds I suspended my sweet words from you
hands not willing to pair
ears not willing to hear
heart not willing to share
I was here... I was there
but hardly by you... that wasn't fair
but imagine how it could be so.. if we could rewind time
and say all that had locked up.. tied together.. choked up hardly rendered
but I know you're gazing down with a smile on your face saying....
you have that chance with each volume of air you breathe
to show that love today to the ones who still live
see my friends
there is no tick tock second to waste on mixed up feeling of wrath and grudges... let it all go
because today our flesh stands on two feet
but tomorrow it may be lying down beneath six feet
Scheme | XXX XAAX BXBBB XXX XX XXCC |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011 1101 11010101111 111111111101010 111111001 111111001 01001101011111 111011 111011 111011 111111 110111101 101011111111101 01111111010111010 111110110111110 111111101111 111101101111 111 11111101111110110101111 01011011111 1011111010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 906 |
Words | 188 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 4, 5, 3, 2, 4 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 120 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
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Submitted on October 29, 2014
Modified on April 06, 2023
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