Analysis of Finger Painting



Finger-Painting
A warrior grazes on the beast of death.
While finger-painting marks the walls
As bombs fall within it's darken halls
With a sighing planets on its last breath.

Once a world of beliefs now reneged
The shells near not its intended mark.
Thunderbolts drop on the man of dark.
While the orb spits upon who begged.

No intervention from an earth in peril grasp.
Tree's burn in flames, houses flare in vain,
Nothing still stands by the criminally insane.
Like a tool upon the land leaving a barren rasp.

As a man's childish world of finger-painting art
Destroyed in him from a life he now departs.


Scheme XABBA XCCX DEED XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1010 0100110111 11010101 111011101 1010101111 101101101 011110101 1110111 10110111 10101110101 110110101 101110100001 1010101100101 101101110101 01011011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 592
Words 107
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on July 05, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Norman Wilson

IntroductionForgotten are the times the tick of a clock once chimed sobering sounds that caressed my hearts nightly dreams. As I awaken to the touch of light that burns upon a candles wick flickering my words for all to see. This drives my thoughts through the darkest of nights of loneliness that renders my quill upon parchment with ink that dances to minds and souls.Now I hear the screeching of my heart when the blue horizon covers the orb of emptiness.Within the shelter of my mind with little, purpose other than my words that keep me sane. These are my new poems I have written in the quiet of my night, forever wished away in a writer’s pain. As I strive to write that perfect poem that, my soul desperately seeks. Then and only then can my words rest upon a sleep. more…

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