Analysis of Facing my loss again



Away into the velvet black
Of darkness my relentless pain
To leave your side
Leaves a metallic bitter taste
Your skin crys out
As my fingers last caress
Longing for my touch
Im left yearning for its feel
The scent of your perfume
Follows me agony throughout
This the last time i will face this torture
I can take this bitter loss no more
The mirror reflects my missery
But holds no answers
To loniless im forever bound


Scheme ABCDEFGHIEJKJLM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 01010101 11010101 1111 10010101 1111 1110101 10111 1110111 011101 10110001 1011111110 111110111 0100111 11110 1110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 404
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 341
Words per stanza (avg) 78
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Submitted on October 15, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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clifton redmond

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