Analysis of Existire



Sembraste adentro de mi ser la semilla
Como aquella que se tira al campo y se germina
Ese día volé perdido como de norte ha sur
Quien sabe cuanto que tuve desviaciones
Hacia los cuatro puntos cardinales del mundo
Con mis labios todos deshidratados y mis brazos
Todos llenos de cansancio me hicieron caer
En el llano de tu cuerpo que me esperaba
Como pasto humedecido, fui bendito, fui bendito
El hombre más grande viajando al infinito
Me elevaste ha las alturas, al tomarte con
Mis propias manos de tu cintura, tu amor
Como el rocío cayendo lento sobre el rostro mío
Y como despertaba del pensamiento en que tu amor
Me elevaba haciéndome viajar entre las nubecillas
Todas blancas y mi amor te saciaba que tu cuerpo
Unificado al mío me exigía que te amara! Viaje
Ha ese mundo encantado del baile de las hadas
Y vuestros cuerpos ya desnudos en el alma
Que con el amor celebraba una nota particular
Yo tu hombre y tu mi amada! Tus manos se prendieron
Ha mi cuello y como Diosa te me entregabas permitiendo
Entregara yo mi hombría regando adentro de tu ser
Aquella semilla de la vida, y tu rostro en nada me mentía
Bella, como la misma luz del día! Mi necesidad de amarte
Me acerco mas  y mas ha ese mundo agradable donde
Me hiciste sentir grande al amarme, y el lunar de tu rostro
Era radiante como un sol culminante, el amor fue grato
Y aquel vacío tan grande que había en mi interior
Lo llenaste con tu mundo de amor, no me sueltes amor mío
Me gritabas al oído, y tomándote con fuerza, te traje
Ha un nuevo camino donde la vida existirá aun después
Que me halla ido, donde existiré para siempre ha tu recuerdo.

Autora: Ana Pelayo.


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Words 305
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 33, 1
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 654
Words per stanza (avg) 152
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Submitted on August 24, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ana Pelayo

My name is Ana Pelayo, I was born in Autlan City in the the State of Jalisco Mexico to Florentino and Paz Pelayo by September 1st,1971.I strongly believe that I was born to be a poet, for I love poetry and enjoy writing poems, I wish to get close to the people's heart and give them a little bit of my knowledge as poet, for I believe that many of us we can write and think about the beautifully things that we can do, but not all of us can be a poet, Some of us we are trying to express our feelings and that's very good we think that poetry will come up later, but I do think that some of us we were born to be poets. I feel it, I live it, I think it, I have it, and It is into my veins,and I loved. I know I was born to be a poet! Mom, many thanks for taking me to school every morning and for teaching me the principles of life, love and respect. My book is dedicated to both of you,the ones I love, Miss: Paz Pelayo and Mr: Pelayo my lovely Parents, I love you! Also I dedicate this book of poems to my husband Mr: Jose Salazar and my children for they are my other treasures, I love you all! I thank God for letting me know how much I love you now when I am alive, when I am here and I have all of you close to me. Asking God to protect and bless you all,Ana Pelayo. more…

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