Analysis of Evil Within



Evil Within
Upon this winter's day I shall find
A life that ravels like a ball of twine.
And within that twining spool of thread
A life, long lived in a crimson red.
While evil demons and spirits speak to me,
There is no atoning for the wrongs meant to be.
As I wander in midsummer terror of night,
A brier of flame sends ashes in flight.
My vision still blurs in the black forest of sin,
Not knowing all evil of hell comes from within.


Scheme ABCDDEEFFAA
Poetic Form
Metre 1001 011101111 011110111 001110111 011100101 11010010111 1111101111 111001101011 0101111001 110110011011 110110111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 426
Words 86
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 341
Words per stanza (avg) 86
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Submitted on July 05, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Norman Wilson

IntroductionForgotten are the times the tick of a clock once chimed sobering sounds that caressed my hearts nightly dreams. As I awaken to the touch of light that burns upon a candles wick flickering my words for all to see. This drives my thoughts through the darkest of nights of loneliness that renders my quill upon parchment with ink that dances to minds and souls.Now I hear the screeching of my heart when the blue horizon covers the orb of emptiness.Within the shelter of my mind with little, purpose other than my words that keep me sane. These are my new poems I have written in the quiet of my night, forever wished away in a writer’s pain. As I strive to write that perfect poem that, my soul desperately seeks. Then and only then can my words rest upon a sleep. more…

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