Analysis of Enough!



There is no blazing sun

Wind is cool

And rays have turned soft

Take out you black glass

Keep it up and aloft

Sun is not raging fire

Then why you O my dear

Feeling jealous and are on severe ire

Let the season take turn

Then you will notice

How itching is this sun burn

Every time there is ice in my compound

And every time it melts to water

Every season changes

And winds change direction

But your awesome hateful heart beat

Never reflect a little affection

And every season you leave me glum without glee

Can you once, just once say

I love you

Let it be just a fake

But your words will sweeten my mouth

Like delicious fruit jelly cake

Then off course you can put a final brake

After all how many season do i witness

My turn is over

Now i am going to sleep finally in harness.

There is no blazing sun

Wind is cool

And rays have turned soft

Take out you black glass

Keep it up and aloft

Sun is not raging fire

Then why you O my dear

Feeling jealous and are on severe ire

Let the season take turn

Then you will notice

How itching is this sun burn

Every time there is ice in my compound

And every time it melts to water

Every season changes

And winds change direction

But your awesome hateful heart beat

Never reflect a little affection

And every season you leave me glum without glee

Can you once, just once say

I love you

Let it be just a fake

But your words will sweeten my mouth

Like delicious fruit jelly cake

Then off course you can put a final brake

After all how many season do i witness

My turn is over

Now i am going to sleep finally in harness.


Scheme A B C D E F G H I J I K F L A M A N O P Q R Q Q J F J A B C D E F G H I J I K F L A M A N O P Q R Q Q J F J
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 111 01111 11111 111001 1111010 111111 1010011011 101011 11110 1101111 10011110110 0100111110 1001010 011010 11101011 1001010010 0100101111011 111111 111 111101 11111011 10101101 1111110101 101110101110 11110 1111011100010 111101 111 01111 11111 111001 1111010 111111 1010011011 101011 11110 1101111 10011110110 0100111110 1001010 011010 11101011 1001010010 0100101111011 111111 111 111101 11111011 10101101 1111110101 101110101110 11110 1111011100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,518
Words 314
Sentences 3
Stanzas 54
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 54
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on January 26, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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