Analysis of Drunken thoughts



As i wander lost
 through dark narrow streets
The meandering path
Of a million feet
The tavern door
Is locked it seems
I'll no longer dance
In the whiskey dreams
The luring stench
Of smoke and dust
Take me places
No man must
The haunting crys
Of the ghosts of past
Into the willderness
 I've now been cast
I stagger blindly
No more at ease
Souls are stirring
In the the gentle breeze
Craving for more
Escaping drowned
Lost in the glass
Where i'll never be found


Scheme ABCDEFGFHIJIBKBKLMNMEOPO
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 11101 001001 10101 0101 1111 11101 00101 0101 1101 1110 111 0101 10111 0101 1111 11010 1111 1110 000101 1011 0101 1001 111011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 438
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 370
Words per stanza (avg) 87
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Submitted on October 15, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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clifton redmond

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