Analysis of Dragonfly Days



Nothing escapes fates fitful eye
 in bringing down your joy in waves
 that twirl around controlling signs
 of gleeful hint or smugness felt

Care be affront of your clear mind
 and only sips be taken thus
 from passions overflowing cup
 that placed a blindfold tightly bound

And so the summer blessed your brow
 amid the buds and smells that fuse
 a fateful longing for the sun
 with baying calmness you relent

Dragonfly days of yesteryear
 returning as the bluebells sway
 invades a dreamlike moment brought
 while serpents wind around your neck

The darkness comes as fangs take bite
 you twist and jerk in spasm thrown
 into the dirt beneath you lie
 condemned for taking in the view


Scheme AXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX XXAX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10011101 01011101 11010101 11011101 11011111 01011101 1101001 1101101 01010111 01010111 01010101 11010101 11110 0101011 0101101 11010111 01011111 11010101 01010111 01110001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 684
Words 119
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on August 23, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dave Ratcliffe

Some of my imagery may seem a little on the dark side at times but I feel the pain of the chastened and broken among my close family and friends. I write from the heart to express my innermost thoughts through song lyrics and poetry. I try always, ‘to be true to my philosophy of understanding tolerance, to share my perceptions and desires with integrity’. I have just finished my first play which was both a challenging and rewarding experience, which I intend to follow up on. I enjoy reading poetry from all over the world. Poetry.com is a great platform for me to network with other like-minded people and showcase my own work for others to be moved and inspired. After all this is the duty of a poet…I have just had my first poetry book published with the Title Scratching the Page and my thanks go to Michael Dobson for producing it and to all those who read it more…

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