Analysis of Downpour



OH God
So calm,so quiet;so smooth,so silky
Such a silvern sky,the blacken,silvern sky!
Threaten to rain any time
Wind has already started blowing for sometime
His wild,violent,mountainous Presence is
marked by each and every leaf,tree,dirt
in the streets
And I and my soul for the sake of the
Impending(imminent) sweet storm
Make Peace,have truce,and fly the white flag
up on the pole;Oh God it`s so calm,it`s so
numb;it seems to me just the moment before
love summit,love come
At this moment a few water drops start to
drip off Heaven`s stream;inch by inch the
rate increase
It now comes with spoons,ponds,bucketsfull
Upon the back of my tin-shed roof
It rings, rings, rings


Scheme ABCDDEAFGHIJKLMGNOPQ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Metre 11 111110 101111 1011101 11010101011 11101 11101001 001 0101110110 01010011 1111011 110111111 1111101001 111 11100110111 1111110 101 11111 010111111 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 656
Words 130
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 540
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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