Analysis of Disillusioned....

Alone and enraged, I stand here,
disillusioned, I have found fear.
Fear, is it what this is?
Now that I have lost the eternal bliss..

My heart is shattred,lost am I,
she has left nothing more to pry;
the sky up high, dark and tarnished,
and here am i,forgotten and languished.

The scythe of fate,as I have found,
Is sharp upon my neck,expectations drowned.
figure less, my love is unchanged
Even though my heart is now in chains..

Disillusioned,am i out of control?
Or is this the fear haunting my soul?
Fear, is it what this is?
Now that I have lost the eternal bliss..

Scheme xxAB ccdd eexx ffAB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 01001111 0101111 111111 1111100101 111111 11110111 01111010 0111010 0111111 1101111 10111101 101111101 111101 111011011 111111 1111100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 565
Words 112
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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