Analysis of Continuum




You act as if you don't want to know,
So you sit there and cover your nose.
But everyone is curious to find out,
The continuity of the theorem of time!
If you can take a Schwarzschild Radius,
And the density of mass at a singularity,
Then maybe gravity can be bent to a point,
Where you can create a wormhole in space.
Then, all things being equal, add relativity,
Where the space/time continuum coexist.
And with the gravity that we have just bent,
We can change the density of mass, matter,
So that an Event Horizon can open a gateway,
Leading to another place in space or time.
If you are lost then may I suggest to you,
To study the propositions that are set forth,
To a truth the mind cannot seem to find.
And so tonight I will sit down and reason,
In my mind I will calculate a solution,
A theorem, as I might say, for time travel!
All of the equations are there for me to see,
It is just getting past the density,
Of my thick head!

Rîchård Açévédø
5/29/13


Scheme XXABXAXXCXXXXBXXXDDXCCX CX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111111111 111101011 1101100111 00100101011 111101100 0010011101 110100111101 111010101 111101010100 1011010001 01010011111 11101001110 1110101011001 10101010111 11111110111 11000101111 1010110111 01011111010 01111100010 01011111110 110010111111 1111010100 1111 111011 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 955
Words 187
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 23, 2
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 375
Words per stanza (avg) 93
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Submitted on February 21, 2017

Modified on April 18, 2023

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