Analysis of Brown Painted Bottles



Pretty old
The great they appear
Few who are good on the faces
And also good behind your back
Now, who are good and neutral, always
Are yet to be found?
Are they placeable?
Can you see those?
Some people assume of the someone's becoming a lesson
As to how, ten years from hence,
Would their daughters, look like?
Why should not, they be cautioned, and beforehand?
Now, injustice meted to out to so many
And then hoping for the returns?
Paying the price is better
For let this be the stock exchange
Where people invest from the bottom
Of their soul, heart, feet, fingers, fist and palm
Their breaths, their lives
Doing something to someone is easy
But when you really suffer on your own..
That's the time, you need a savior
Some people get lucky
Some people get slayed off
Many succumb to the wrath.
What is the quality of energy?
Which they created?
It depends on that,
And, to see of, how their self centred energies?
The drama, they exude?
Will then ever get addressed
And, how they win,
Just too, by fluke.
Great amount of fortitude, levellers, functionals
Would then, be needed
How about this ?
Or How about that?
Want to play a gamble?
Wish to dance around the candles?
Or Want to look like a clown in a circus?
Will depend upon, how the other one fares?
It then,becomes important to find ways
Of being able to escape the wrath..
Of the, then, vulnerable forces.
Yes, education is indespensable on this note..
Of how, many admissions, visits and submissions
One wrote?
It is a deadly occasion


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,459
Words 273
Sentences 24
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 48
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,167
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Deepshikha Singh

I am someone, who if assigned work, does not ever leave it unfinished and would prefer giving my best. I know how to impress people and know the importance of time, money and energy. Any task that I do, have to be done with absolute finesse is my credo. I can empathize very strongly with anyone in trouble and not just understand but also try to bring succor to the person with whatever the least to the maximum that I can do. I can bring life to the dull, dreary and monotonous surroundings; know how to have my ways out with people who are deemed upon as a tough call, have good reporting skills and have sound logical reasoning. It brings a lot of happiness to me when I see people around me happy and doing what they always wished they’d be doing. I want to earnestly give back to the society that had been recognized in its own way. To have a quick count upon my strengths, I have impressionable interpersonal skills, is well spoken, know how to conduct myself in social settings, is very ambitious, want to do everything in the most transparent manner possible, quickly able to adapt to the environment, a very fast learner, is decisive, good grasping skills, highly inquisitive and very enquiring, a strict disciplinarian and believe strongly in excelling at everything I undertake, never scared of any hard work, effective negotiation skills, never carry airs around myself, is honest to the core, is very diligent, endorse the finest from Hinduism and the Indian tradition. I am very spiritual and have a positive outlook towards life. I accept my mistakes and try not to repeat them in the future. I can connect with God in my weak moments and seek strength. I have no fears of speaking in public and voicing my opinions, is a fighter for a cause if deserving, have good communication skills, is a poet in hobby, overall a zealous and persevering personality with a pinch of charm and unsurpassable wit. To state the weaker aspect of my personality, I can get too much immersed in my work until the time I see it reaching a culmination point, can be less social at times and would yearn for partial withdrawal if not total, the political activities at the work place can be a let down, and I can react at the break- neck speed, if provoked, I have the tendency to believe people without doing my own amount of the investigation, I do not appreciate procrastination and would have a difficulty, if I have to work with someone in my team who is , since always, lazy and lethargic.Born in 22 March 1981 at New Delhi,India and education of Masters Degree in Management and habit of reading and writing are my inspirations.Towards poetry “Nobel House of London” published poem "Frivolity of Yesterday” in the year 2008 and I was the recipient of the Editor's Best Choice Award at a symposium held in Los Angeles. Poem "Bid Farewell" is my favorite composition and I write to the give the right vent to the feelings I adorn, good or bad , I know how to be able to make everything beautiful around me, try to and love of Shakespearean literature and Keats enriched my perceptivity, to poem "As you like it”,then “The language”, Epic poem “ ”Silence” are few closing near publication.Your Support has been encouraging.And I thank you really.If you wish to know more about me and what I do, you can facebook me: http://facebook.com/singhdeepshikha more…

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